[Infinity Star Team] Keith

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Hello Infinitian, Friends & Staffs! Im applying even though there are too many applications right now but Im not letting my guard down.

Here we go..

Name: Keith Oliver Arao
Age:19
English level: Good (Playing safe but Im currently a student of Civil engineering-3)
Reason for joining: Articles/Newspaper works is not a easy one, but ye the reason why I join is that i want to help the team. Not only that I want to enhance more of my language ability and to prove that Im good at this.
Time I can spend: 6-12 Hours
Position Applying for: Writter
Samples of my Works:

(Dont hesitate to Read)
#1

Spammers to Voters!


Who will forget this three active spammers on Forum “Xanne*, Keith, Chi.” Well you can see them in some/many threads most likely in spam threads. What they have become now is that they have grown to Spammers to Voters.

Even though they did not achieved in promoting Infinity MU as one of the TOP 10 on list of XtremeTop100 , still they support Infinity MU. We should thank them in such a way that they inspired new ones to keep voting. We should admire those people who are willing to support our lovely server in such a little way like Voting. They give time waking up early just to vote. For me I sacrifice some of my classes/family bonding even invitations just to keep the time left where I can vote.

Aint agree seeing our lovely server not on the Top10. Why? It is because this is not we’re supposed to be. Our Reputation is too High seeing our server only in Top20. That’s why even though I just got the top voter tag I always keep an eye to the forum event ”Top Lucky voter” not to let down our server. But to challenge everyone or the people WHO AIM for tag and the prize. For me its not just about the prizes and the tag. Not for bragging I did gave my prize to my friend who is having a birthday today.

Its just a matter of time to vote. Keep our server on the top. We should always support our dearest game if you want to have higher prizes.


(Not related to game)
#2

*Fighting for LOVE*

In love, you will encounter many thing. Some people will take away the one you love. So, you need to fight to overcome those odds/hindrances to attain the victory that your heart desires. What’s right then fight for it.

However, there are times that people will see you as a bad person but put this in your mind “That ever you do its because of LOVE.: No matter how bad they see of you, no matter what they tell. It doesn’t matter, what does matter is what you have in your heart. A pure and true LOVE.

No one has ever been bad person when it comes to love. You just become bad when you do over-the-boundaries actions. And some people will not understand how willing you are to sacrifice everything you have. How persevere you are to absorb all the needed power, confidence, faith, respect and love just to save the only love you’ve wanted for all your life.

There are many people who searched for love. Many people regretted their past relationships. Many people who sacrificed for love. Many people failed in love. But did they ever stop looking for what they want? Maybe SOME, but still most of them fought until they won the war. Maybe, even some are still fighting and becoming superhero just to save their relationship. Well, never get tired of saving a relationship, especially if its worth it than to regret your life for a lifetime!

#3

*Relationship: Single!*

Single? No Relationship? They say being single means you know nothing about Love. Well, I don’t believe that. Rather being single is the happiest thing that a person can ever experience.

When you’re single you don’t have to worry about what your Lover is doing. You don’t have to worry about paying bills when you are on a date. You don’t have to worry about pregnancy because you are safe. And when you’re single you’re free to do things you like. No tears, no heartbreaks, no fighting, no pain. Nothing but yourself and the whole world to explore. That’s the benefits of being a single.

It is better to be single or inspired than to be in relationship yet sometimes it is confusing. Many single people are inspired in a lot of thing likewise to a friend, to his/her family and even to his/her career.
Being single isn’t bad. You don’t have to rush for love for Love is Everywhere. And when it’s your time to have a relationship then it’s time. When it happens, it happens. But, now that love is not yet around. Have fun, Have party! Live your life to the fullest. You will never know how long you’ll be single. So Enjoy till it LAST!


Hope you read some articles on mine even One :)
Feel Free to right some Suggestion & Comment (Highly Appreciated)


-Keith.
 

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I really like your first article. It's very inspiring and I'm a fellow spammer even though i don't join at TLV. I can at least say that you're really into this. Your introductions are very good and it makes the article interesting to read. Your English is good as well but i can point out few grammar mistakes. Well I'm sure that you'll still level up. YES for me in this one. You have what it takes to report :)
 

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Nice Articles Gey Brotha :D Goodluck to your Application :D
 

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You have my Y.E.S! :)
Nice article :grin:
I enjoy reading too :D
Good LucK :happyy:
 

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Hola Keith!

Once and foremost, I'd like to say that I see a great potential in you. So, please be considerate enough to reflect on these healthy criticisms that you are about to read. I'm not posting these things to put you down nor to discourage you. In fact, I'm gonna say 'yes' to your application. I just have several questions and some sort of reminders.

On the first article, there are some flaws in the usage of tenses. You have to be very particular and extra careful in using verbs because they are very crucial in grammar and composition. Also, be more consistent with the subject or the main topic of your article. I think you know what I mean. Anyway, those blemishes are considerable. I know you'll improve more and more as time goes by.

Here are the most obvious errors in your first article.


Keith said:
Spammers to Voters!

Who will forget this three active spammers on Forum “Xanne*, Keith, Chi.” Well you can see them in some/many threads most likely in spam threads. What they have become now is that they have grown to Spammers to Voters.

Even though they did not achieved in promoting Infinity MU as one of the TOP 10 on list of XtremeTop100 , still they support Infinity MU. We should thank them in such a way that they inspired new ones to keep voting. We should admire those people who are willing to support our lovely server in such a little way like Voting. They give time waking up early just to vote. For me I sacrifice some of my classes/family bonding even invitations just to keep the time left where I can vote.

Hmmm... Something's telling me that there's something wrong with the next two articles.
I'll just leave it hanging in the air though. Good luck, Keith!

Ajah! <3
Go go go!

:76:
 

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I can see that you made so much efforts for your sample. Yes for me! Good luck :)
 

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I read your articles,and it is quite impressive. :) Your potiential is there and also I love on how you construct your application. based on my comments you already know whats my answer :) goodluck!
 

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Nice and impressive article Keith, I'll give a YES in your Infinity Star appli cuz you fit also in this team, I know that this tag is a hard work for you, and I know you will put effort on it if you been approve by the higher staff. :)
Goodluck Friend!
 

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Hello Kieth,

I will vote for a YES! because I know that you can handle this job and your article is kinda amazing and I like it! Your article is kinda easy to understand. Good to see that you're willing to help in Newspaper :) Good Luck Buddy!
 
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