Event POLL InfinityMU Author - September 2020

[Djinny]

Hello, dears!

It's time for us to choose the InfinityMU Author, September Edition!


Topic: Greed as downfall

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Here are the entries:



donthitme

IGN:xxSlash

The power to have anything is awesome indeed.
But the power to give everything overcomes greed.
Just remember to get what you only need.
So that in the chains of greed may your soul be freed.

Being Greedy comes with a price.
Don't be afraid to throw down the dice.
Always look deep inside what you truly desire.
But keep in mind that it should be fair to acquire.

If it is Power that you seek,
Training and hunting is something you should speak.
Do not worry about your Losing Streak.
Everyday is another chance to take a Leap.

hahakeeu

Greed

Greed, Greed ,Greed
You do things just to get what you need,
May it be a bad or a good deed,
You get blind, not knowing where it lead.

You do all things,
Not thinking what it brings,
You may become the queens and kings,
But with you, downfall clings.

You tend to forget from wrong and right,
From here and there you see a fight,
You are doing this just to stay on the light,
Be careful, you might get a bite.

PotatoHead's entry is disqualified due to potato head:

5. The story size should be a SHORT POEM - YOU HAVE TO WRITE A POEM
WITH A MINIMUM OF 8 LINES AND MAXIMUM OF 12 LINES

Congrats to all for participating and sharing their lovely entries with iMU community and gudluck!


•VOTES WITHOUT A REASON WILL BE DELETED•​

 

[Peaceful]

voted for hahakeeu, like always he bring his great writing skills, liked it a lot.

 

[Halfdanjal]

To me entry of donthitme stood out due to it having deeper message in my opinion, it just kind of made me actually imagine something, whereas entry of hahakeeu did not, which is why donthitme earns my vote. Nevertheless, both entries are great, I will always be amazed by the ability to write a poem.

 

[Varamyr]

My vote goes to donthitme i like the fact that he put deeper meaning on his poem and that he is sharing it with us ..

 

[MrPsych0]

I voted for donthitme, very well wrotten and enjoyable to read. good luck next month!

 

[Booms]

Both entries are good but for me, donthitme's poem got a better and deeper meaning.