[2nd Infinity Star Application]#Kappa

[#Kappa]

Hello again everyone !

My name's Kappa and here I am applying for the Infinity Star position again, well lets get to it !

Name : Wileyto Yray
Language/s:English,Filipino,Bisaya,Chinese
Forum work hours:I can spend up to 3-5 hours daily,depends on my schedule

Why do I want to become an Infinity Star ?

It's because I think i am capable for this position because I am a sports writer and at the same time a news writer

Sorry if I have low activity for now , I will improve that.


Here's my article:

WILEYTO

My full name is Wileyto T. Yray,I was born on May 22 in Cebu,Philippines.I joined this community last year I think....I currently live in N. Bacalso Avenue,Cebu City.

I am an athletic boy.I play basketball,badminton,golf and more.I am currently studying in SouthWestern University Cebu.I have 2 brothers,aged 22 and 19 and currently live with me here in our apartment.

I already won a lot of Sports writing tournaments,news writing tournaments here in our school.My passion in writing began because I can explore the world by writing.

InfinityMu

InfinityMu is a game where you play with your friends or make new ones.The founder of the server is no other than our beloved administrator,RESiSTANT.The max level of the game is 400,which is easy to get,because the exp rate is 999999x and the drop rate is also the same with the exp rate.


To play InfinityMu,you will need an Inten Xeon CPU E5-1620v2 Processors (8 x 3.70GHz),a 64GB DDR3 ECC 1600MHz RAM,1 GBPS port.

The seasom of the server is Season 3 Episode 1 , it will always be S3E1.The game is protected by a unique proprietary anti-cheating software with advanced anti dupe system.There are 4 servers in the game.
Necron (Non PVP)
Phoenix (Non PVP)
Odin (Classic PVP)
Pegasus (Balanced Class PVP)
Siege (Classic PVP)

You can become a,
Wizard,
Dark Wizard ,
Soul Master ,
Grand Master

Knight,
Dark Knight ,
Blade Knight,
Blade Master

Elf,
Fairy Elf,
Muse Elf,
High Elf

Gladiator,
Magic Gladiator,
Duel Master

Lords,
Dark Lord,
Lord Emperor

The game also has events,big events,small events.The events will be hosted by our fellow staff or our very own infinitians.There are events such as Kill The Boss,Infinity Idol,Infinity Got Talent,and many more !It is truly one of the best games you will ever play !

So what are you waiting for ? Come and Play now !


Well,that's all.

Any comment will be accepted,bad or good.

I really hope I can join the team because it is in need of members .

Thank you and Godbless

 

[TechN9ne]

Your last apply got denied 3 days ago. What changed??

 

[Iceman]

I'm still not so convinced with the articles that you made. Try to more constructive. Like introduction of the topic, body contains explanation of the topic and then closing remarks. When I tried to read yours its kinda summarized and also kinda like a copy paste of the original. Try to be more spontaneous. How about what can you say about InfinityMU in your perspective?

 

[Keith]

Same with Iceman, I'm not convinced. You know activity is important too in writing an article ( forum or in game) because its hard to write an article if you are not present in the said event like kill the boss,etc. I know you're willing to improve your activity as well as your article and I will give you some tips.

Try to stick atleast 2-3 interesting events then come up with an idea it includes uniqueness etc..
Research some facts through interviewing the host and so on..
And lastly Write your article..

If you get this for sure your next application as a writer will be a YES YES to me..
Goodluck!

 

[Sab]

I see you are rushing your applications, I can see you only want the tag. If you really want this job you should first prove yourself more cause I'm not really convinced when I read your sample article. We are really in need of help but we need new recruits that we can depend on.

 

[Sudd3n]

To me, i dont think you have attained the level of being a sports or news writer. I dont think your work is considered good either judging by the poor vocabulary and grammber utilized in each sentence. Al these tiny components make up a good report that is interesting and attractive to people to read. I guess we need this kind of people thus i recommend you should either brush up ur english standard or forgo the application.Thank.s no hard feelings ^_^

 

[Arz]

thats your apply 3 days ago
http://forum.infinitymu.net/showthr...-Star-Application-Kappa&p=1072921#post1072921

same thing , you didnt change a thing , in those 3 days never seen u helping any1 or doing somthing useful, your articles are not good enough in order for you to get accepted in infinitystar , instead of wasting your time by making applies every 2-3 days
foucs on your articles ...

and next time when u wanna re apply , proove ur self first.
its not a game..

a hell no.

 

[Cosmo]

Well, 3 Days ago you've got denied by your application. then after that you've been make your application again last night, I think you are only want to join this job to gain the Tag only, but then I'm not sure if your effort will be worth it, who knows right? But then your article is well said. And I can see you Activity is not too quite low but then you must be active more. And now you must be worth on it. in order to be accepted. So now my vote is YES. and GOODLUCK!

 

[Syd]

I haven't seen any changes since your last application, I know you want to be part of the team but at least work hard to get in. Do not rush things, when the time is come, you will part of team soon. Take these comments (Infinitians comments above) as an advice and motivation as well. Apply when there's an improvement. But for now, I have to deny your application, again. Good luck!