Application for Infinity Star - Sasha

[Chanz]

Hello again to all Infinitians , i know that i applied for the Wiki team. And i have of lot work to become one of the Wiki team , well i am here to apply for the Infinity Star. I would like to share my ideas on articles and give help to other's.

Here are my previous applications for Wiki Team:

1st: http://forum.infinitymu.net/showthread.php?81061-Application-for-Wiki-team-Sha

2nd: http://forum.infinitymu.net/showthread.php?81286-Re-Application-for-Wiki-team-Sasha

Introduction:

Name: Shara Mae Sanchez
Age: 17
Location: Philippines
Languages: English and tagalog (filipino)
Time zone: GMT+8
Gender: Female
Birthdate: February 28,1997

Why Do you want to be part of the Infinity Star?

First of all I 'm writing an application for Infinity Star, and would like to help please not only within the game. And would like to share my skills in making the articles of our community , I will do my best to write an article for players to express their beautiful game possessions. I know that you will be confused when you see this application for Infinity Star. Since I 'm already applied for Wiki Team , but my skills are not enough to spot that I wanted to achieve. And now I want to show you all that , I'll do everything I can to see that you deserved this position I applied for. I am here to help and share messages, all players with various platforms is provided by our staff. And you think about me, then I am not here to herd the Tag. I will not please do something to ruin my fourth , I direct my work and I will be diligent and trustworthy.

Article about Castle Siege:

Here in this article , many players get the spot to claim the throne. And before you join this contest , you must own a group / guild to join. And that requires a diterminasyon , strength and dedication especially team work.
And if your group / guild is in harmony , maybe you should be recognized as strong and united group / guild. And the contest is , just start every sunday . 12am until 2am in the morning , this time just for Philippines GMT + 8.

Article about Forum/in game Event:

In this article you'll find all of our brave platform Staff , led by our administrators that was resistant. Leisurely participate in the contest conducted by our staff , such as the recently discovered that Idol event . Boykiyo 's winnings , and now he's performed in the month of November Idol. And now this December many events will be shared with us the Mighty and hardworking staff member 's. And join the wonderful contest , led by our leaders InfinityMu. And this pagpasuk of December there nanamang contest conducted and led by Sir Iceman and the contest he initiated Christmas Costume. And do not wish to waste the opportunity, many prizes and you will enjoy.

Article about InfinityMU:

Our continued possession until now still are many players , not just locally but across the world . It is known not only in the kind of players , but many have become friends. And now it remains durable and reliable, the leadership of our administrators that was resistant . Work for the support and assistance to its players.
InfinityMU happy to play here , because many people are playing it. And it remains to be known games in the world. And InfinityMU discovered our noble resistant February 2008. And until now he continues to support and provide joy to all players.

Kindly refrain from posting in this thread unless its for suggestions or objections. I do not wish to see spam, or unwanted posts, despite the fact that they may mean well. You can thank me through Visitor Messaging or thx button. Lets keep this thread clean. Yes, "good job bro" or things along those lines are spam.

Thanks for reading my very short application for Infinity Star.

All comments will be appreciated.

Sasha,

 

[HARREN]

Honestly, I haven't seen anybody to improve in english in 3 days, that's your last application. I assume nothing has changed, don't rush for the tags.

 

[Heruvim]

You do realise that the articles that the Infinity Star Group will create will be showed on the official page of Infinity-Mu

And i think you realise that we cannot let something like this appear on the official page

Article about Castle Siege:

Here in this article , many players get the spot to claim the throne. And before you join this contest , you must own a group / guild to join. And that requires a diterminasyon , strength and dedication especially team work.

It looks just bad and unprofessional, and an article that will show up on the official page is supposed to be professional, about grammar, i guess i don't need to say anything about that.

That being said, my answer is NO.

 

[Sava]

Are u human yes? Do u can read yes? If u can write your name well then you can read well too. Improve yourself.

Re-read the following:

Sasha,look these are the things you must work on:


2.Your English level is not up to the standard needed,you need more improvement on it.As in your previous application I stated you need to improve on sentence construction,no repetition of words,making connection between simple sentences making them into a complicated sentence.Using connection words like thus,furthermore,otherwise,meanwhile and etc.

3.You are not helpful in needed sections,most of your posts are either in the spam section.Concerning your helpful posts,they are mostly repeated from what other people have stated above you,repeated answers are not help Sasha,you must understand it.


5.Don't apply after 3-4 days,when your last application was denied.When we agreed you should wait and improve more,we didn't mean for just a few days.

Improve your skills,show dedication and hard work,help more and then with the facts,we can talk,until then do not rush.

 

[FURY]

I haven't words... I said you one time and I will say you again, don't rush for any position or tags. You just come and do 100 applys and you think you will be in any team ? NO ! You must show what you can do ! (you MUST SHOW not JUST WRITE IN APPLYS - I AM THE BEST I CAN BE ADMIN hah NO). Make suggestions, guides or whatever is need for whatever position you want. Maybe I will agree with HARREN, you are hunter of tags. Work 1~2 month in our forum (HELP with reports, suggestions etc, as I said "whatever is need for whatever position you want"). This is big minus for ya. I mean you rush for position or you are hunter for tags. And, you are like unknown, help to our forum & game 1 month and you will be know. And then one more month helps and then try to apply for whatever position you want (if you want because you are like hunter for tags [I say this for 3rd time and remember this] and I know that you are hunter because all say this and you have now Infinity Hardcore, why you don't ask for [vn]Veteran[/vn], Vip, Spammer, etc ? - PS: I won't offence you but..) Hope you will understand us and you will not do apply after 1week again... O and, better if you tried 3rd apply for Wiki Team because Infinity Star is need more than Wiki Team. Infinity Star is for write texts, for gfxing, and something more. BIG NO FROM ME !!! Good luck !

 

[Hakuryuu]

Haha,
I wonder what are these?

And this pagpasuk of December there nanamang contest

You can't really wait eh? you just recently applied for Wiki Team few days ago and now you are here again..
I know who you really are, but I'll just pretend that I don't xD anyway, I'm not good at doing/making articles but I know what the good articles are, and yours need some more improvements.

 

[Kenya]

I will make it short, you have a poor level of english, which is escencial to write articles (beeing an IS as in Wiki). We are a big community with people all around the world, a fluid english is basic to be a part of the team, since its the language that everyone use and must can understand (makes it difficult if your grammar/vocabulary is not good enough).
The blogs you wrote for the possition of wiki team are poor, and you couldnt let your personal comments out from these. You may think (just an example) "BK is the most stronger", but you can be any character and kill a BK, theres not stronger or weakness, you just need to know how to use it. What i wanted to say, is to try when you write something, let your self comments out.
The re-apply after your denied was on one week, and now three days after the last denied to the same possition you have changed of mind with the team.
Both of them needs improving, hard work, and a wish to do it. Not to have the tag only.
What is see, is a good person trying to get accepted, and to grow up on the community. But doing it by getting tags will not help you if you´re gonna to change from team when you get bored of the tags.
Show us that you really want to help by beeing helpful and if your application got denied, dont rush more the things and wait at less 1 month (while you´re helping and improving all the things that our mates told you).
Good luck

 

[Dimer]

Again?
Now look here Sasha first of all,you have no respect for neither of our words,if you did you wouldn't apply after the last application - 2 days.

Second - as I noted 2 times now,your English is poor,you use words even in different language which makes me believe you don't write your applications or you use some kind of a translator.
Your sentences are messy,your construction is of no comment,you repeat words all the time,you need a lot of improvement.Do you think Infinity Star is different than the Wiki? The team is very serious and people work hard there,they worked very hard to earn their reputation and tags.Your reputation is mostly spamming and pretending to do something you don't feel right.

Third - Your tag hunting is absurd.What do you think? - If one fails (Wiki Team),let's go for the other? You just want a tag and you want to achieve it with no hard work,no dedication and no following of our rules.Do you know how hard people work to earn a good reputation here? The answer is short - a lot!Nothing helpful from your posts,only spam and 2 events,making events do not mean you're helping the people when they have problems.

The last one is that you can't apply 3 times in a row in the range of a week,being denied for problems you can overcome for months.
Don't apply again like this,you're not ready for this position.Peace of advise - first decide if you want to help or just want a tag.

/Denied