[Infinity Star- Application]- RecycL[E]

[GSWarriors]

Hello Fellow players I'm here to Apply as a Infinity Star in our Community.
Name: Jhonry Aroza
Birth date:July 13,1996
Age:18
Gender:Male
Location: Davao City, Philippines
Still Studying: Bachelor in Public Administration (3rd year)
Time Zone: GMT +8

How can you help the Infinity Star Team and why you want to join it?

How I can help the Infinity Star Team? I will help the team through my article's in Castle Siege and About InfinityMU not only the team but all of the players in our community and most of all the newbie's. I'm too old in this community I play InfinityMu when I was 13 and that is 2009, and I really know what InfinityMU is it. I want to join in Infinity Star Team because I want to share my knowledge about Mu and I want to try to make an article about our be loving server.

Of course in the application you need to write an article about the following:

- Castle Siege
-This kind of event that you feel a excitement because Castle Siege is full of war and this is the climax of the story why MuOnline has become popular and Why MuOnline was make. And as far as I know, Castle Siege is a place where the guild and alliance fighting for the Crown and own the Castle. And it is good to see the infinitians is competetive to get the Castle and to become King of the Castle.

Castle Siege happened every Saturday, time start 11 PM and end on 1 AM Sunday.


-Infinity MU
-Infinity MU is best private server ever its because, Only Infinity Mu reach 5 years without any rollback and also Infinity Mu they have professional Game Master's , Friendly Staff's, and Respective Staff's and they coordinate in their Golden Rules if you break the rules you will get banned. InfinityMu staff is good if you not break the rules and they are bad if you break their golden rules .
- and Game Master's Event Everyday.


Thanks for Reading my Application.
Any objection or comment just feel free to post here.

And Please Read this Truism:
Kindly refrain from posting in this thread unless its for suggestions or objections. I do not wish to see spam, or unwanted posts, despite the fact that they may mean well. You can thank me through Visitor Messaging or thx button. Lets keep this thread clean. Yes, "good job bro" or things along those lines are spam.

Truly Your's,
RecycL[E]

 

[Marceline*]

Hi there Jhonry. I understand we often make mistakes and we don't need perfect English for Infinity Star anyway but I would like you to reflect on your previous application threads here:
03-28-2015 Application
03-21-2015 Application

But just like everyone stated above, you have a lot of mistakes on your articles.
I'll point out the important parts that are really needed to make a good article.
Grammar - As everyone mentioned, you have a poor grammar (Work more to improve it)
English level - Well, your English is not that bad but I think it's still not enough to qualify on the Infinity Star Team
Use of Caps - As I can see, you always use capital letters on most words from your sentences. That is so wrong

Despite these advises from your previous applications, I do not know why you just literally copied your articles again (even the Caps). For the third time, I believe.


Stay positive and don't give up! But here's one thing, if you're going to repeat the same things all over again (even some mistakes that happened in the past) then you just keep on losing the chance of being accepted.

 

[Andromeda]

You need to put more effort into the application, look at the current newspaper team articles and look at yours. You say 2-3 general sentences and that's your presentation. I wish to give you chance, we always motivate people to be helpful, to apply for positions, to work in order to achieve their wishes.
Present us 2 good articles, at least 250 words each on Mu related topics for March-April situations, events etc and we will consider your application.

 

[Dimer]

Please send me 2 articles which are MADE BY YOU ALONE at the end of 17.04.2015 -> 22:00 gmt+2 or earlier and I will decide wether to give you a shot or no.

Topics are the following:
Castle Siege article
Infinity Idol



Until then this thread will be closed.

 

[Dimer]

I have read the articles you sent me.

Here is my overview of them:
-Poor english,not enough to make a decent article,you repeat words all over the sentences and in the end it makes no sense.
-Poor construction - you don't know where to put a comma or a stop point,most are mixed up and they are not pleasant to the eye.
- 10th application without improvement,you applied for Event Master, Moderator and 6 applications for IS Team without any improvement at all.

I summarised each one of your applications in the past and told you to improve,you even got the same from Kaneki and you still didn't make it up now.



Don't make applications until you have improved,we need quality in the team,the desire alone without at least proper english is futile. We need to show the community some good articles,not just any articles.

/Denied