[Wiki application]Saturn

[v1taL]

Hi everyone its me Saturn and im here to formally apply as wiki member.
Here are my basic information.
Name: Renzo Naval
Age: 20
Location: Bohol, Philippines
Hobbies: Reading magazines(mostly entertainment), playing infinityMU, and practising impressionism.

Why do you want to apply as Wiki member?

Well i got inspired by reading some wiki's on our wiki pages and i noticed there are a lot of possibilities to be written at wiki pages that i can contribute and i've been practising biography articles which includes interviewing players in infinitymu about how they end up playing infinitymu up until today. And i have 0% experience yet at contributing at wiki but a humble person once said "everything starts with nothing". And i noticed few people are handling wiki and mostly Dimer have a lot of things to do in forums and im here thinking, what if i could help out Dimer and the community too. I would be glad to help out the community and its not just for the tag that i wanted, thats just the second reason why i want to join, the main reason is to help the community by providing information to players about wiki on our forums and in game too.

What can you contribute at wiki?

As i said, i have been practicing biography articles about players and his journey through infinityMU. And as infinityMU grow into a much wider and much more bigger community a lot of players and people are interested in infinityMU and of course few people haven't got much knowledge about our server and i want to help them know a lot more about us by contributing at wiki for them to read.

What characteristics you might have to be eligible for wiki membership?

Im an open minded person and i keep it real all the time and of course i might have few setbacks in the past by lying to the whole community about me leaving. And i am truly sorry about it and i have no excuses about it and i accept my mistakes. But im here now to bounce back cause thats what a real infinitian is all about, its to never quit even if it hurts you the most. I am not a quitter and i love this community as much as you guys love it as well.

How much time can you spend if you ever get the job at wiki?

I recently graduated in college and now the burden of having no time for social media has been lifted. I can spend around 5-8 hours a day in forums and reading some new threads and talking to other forumers as well. I think no wait , i can spend my hours in forums if i have to because i love reading at forums and i think i can spend those hours by helping out the wiki pages.

That's all folks, if you have comments please do so with responsibility and to not cause any spam. A humbe "Thanks" is Enough to avoid spam if you have nothing to say relevant about my application. Or you can send me "Visitors Message" for the same reason as well.

 

[Kostas]

I ve read only the 1st paragraph and u got some grammar mistakes. Writing isn't like talking. If u read again loud what u have written, the person who reads it will stay out of breath. Use more dots and more complete sentences. It's essential part of this job to keep the articles clean readable. Good luck

 

[BigStack]

Overall I can clearly see and feel what you’re trying to say. What bothers me is your frequent usage of the conjunction And right after a full stop.

I just finished a sentence here. And this sentence too.

Having three phrases in one sentence is not ideal. I’ve also noticed this on that entry you posted in the lore event. This application isn’t bad. Just try to figure out how to cut phrases.

Nobody is perfect 100% of the time as far as editing goes - unless you work at a newspaper publishing company. The point here is to try to minimize the usage of the minor edit function in our wiki page.

 

[Flippy]

Let's try something. I will give you a theme and you have to write an article about it.
Theme : The Draconite Hunter Event
You must write an article about it , not very long, but to cover all the info and prizes. A good enough article to be posted on our Wiki Page.
[MENTION=35763]BigStack[/MENTION] correct me if we already have anything posted about this in our page.

 

[v1taL]

The Draconite Hunter Event

Its a Big event where mischievous bosses invade the towns of aida and kanturu.
Where the Hellmaine summons at aida and Erohim summons at kanturu. An event that gives off "Draconite", a precious stone or known as dragon stone used to trade with rare and priceless draconite sets such as perseus, ra, andromeda, and seth. To collect each set a player must collect 120 pcs of draconite, in order to trade it with the players choice of draconite uber set. The event also provide a special forum tag called " Draconite Hunter" if you collect all 4 sets. The draco event starts at every 6 hours or invasions occur 4 times per day.

 

[BigStack]

The Draconite Hunter Event

Its a Big event where mischievous bosses invade the towns of aida and kanturu.
Where the Hellmaine summons at aida and Erohim summons at kanturu. An event that gives off "Draconite", a precious stone or known as dragon stone used to trade with rare and priceless draconite sets such as perseus, ra, andromeda, and seth. To collect each set a player must collect 120 pcs of draconite, in order to trade it with the players choice of draconite uber set. The event also provide a special forum tag called " Draconite Hunter" if you collect all 4 sets. The draco event starts at every 6 hours or invasions occur 4 times per day.

Please be mindful about the capitalization of proper nouns. Ra, Andromeda, Kanturu, etc. are proper nouns and must be capitalized. I would’t want this to sound like an English class but your application earlier was better than this. “Where the Hellmaine summons at aida and Erohim summons at kanturu.” could’ve been simply written as “Hellmaine and Erohim spawns both in Aida and Kanturu, respectively”. The way you wrote it could’ve been good in bullet form, where informal phrases can be easily tolerated. However that wasn’t the case. #toughlove
[MENTION=34170]Dreams[/MENTION] Yes that article already exists. It only needs event hours and that’s about it.
https://wiki.infinitymu.net/index.php?title=Draconite
How about Black Edition Sets header? I just barely started brainstorming about the sets.
Monster Points page can be linked with it.

 

[Flippy]

[MENTION=33215]Saturn[/MENTION]?
Try writing on the themes BigStack mentioned and let's see.

 

[v1taL]

Black edition set header

A unique classical type of new sets in accord with 5 new Back Edition sets. Each class have different styles that blend well with new generation players.

Monster Points

A Monster Point is a bounty in which a player slays or kills high quality monsters. Such monsters include Kundun, Golden Monsters, Red Dragons, Draconite Bosses, Maya Event Bosses, Skeleton King, and White wizard. Note that every monster have different quality of Monster points given when killed. Monster points can be exchanged as credits in webshop as well. Monster point shop is also available when you are at a safe town. Press D then click Monster point shop. Monster shop sells Dinorants, Satan, Angels, Pandora's Box and Corncupia Box. Maximum Monster point is 30000.

 

[Dimer]

The Wiki job is currently undergoing fine with BigStack,the Wiki area doesn't need so much work and activity.

I would suggest for you to work on your articles a bit more and would be happy to see a future Infinity Star Application from you

/Denied