[Application-Infinity Star-Seversons

[GSWarriors]

Hello Fellow players I'm here to Apply as a Infinity Star in our Community.
Name: Jhonry Aroza
Birth date: July 13,1996
Age:18
Gender:Male
Location: Davao City, Philippines
Still Studying: Bachelor in Public Administration (3rd year)
Time Zone: GMT +8

How can you help the Infinity Star Team and why you want to join it?

How I can Help The Infinity Star Team? I will help the team through my Article in Castle Siege and About InfinityMU not only the Teams but all of the players in our community and most of all the Newbies. I'm too old in this community I play InfinityMu when I was 13 and that is 2009, and I really know what InfinityMU is it. I want To join in Infinity Star Team because I want to share my knowledge about Mu and I want to try to make an Article About our Be loving Server.

Of course in the application you need to write an article about the following:

- Castle Siege
-This Kind of event that You feel a Excitement because Castle Siege is full of War and this is The climax of the story why MuOnline has become Popular and Why MuOnline was make. And as far as I know, Castle Siege is a place where the guild and alliance fight for a battle for the Crown and own the Castle. And it is good to see the infinitians is competetive to get the Castle and to become King of the Castle. Castle Siege happened every Saturday, time start 11 PM and end on 1 AM Sunday.


-Infinity MU
-Infinity MU is Best Private Server ever its because, Only Infinity Mu Reach 5 Years without any rollback and also Infinity Mu They Have Professional Game Master , Friendly Staff, and Respective Staff and they coordinate in their Golden Rules if you break the rules you will get banned. InfinityMu staff is Good if you not break the rules and they are bad if you break their golden rules .
- and Game Master's Event Everyday.


Thanks for Reading My Application.
Any Objection or Comment Just feel Free to post here.

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[Rara]

I'm not quite satisfied at your Articles and there's a lot of mistakes with the grammar.
I'm neutral on this.

 

[Isotope]

I say no to this application. You got a poor grammar and a very shallow content on each of your article.

 

[Dimer]

What is the number of this application 7-8th? And still you didn't read what Hakuryuu wrote to you the other time nor anything of what has been written in your previous applications,so NO from me.Your artciles are filled with mistakes and last time they were not yours.

 

[Hakuryuu]

So, you made another application as expected, and this time you met the minimum post requirement.

But just like everyone stated above, you have a lot of mistakes on your articles.
I'll point out the important parts that are really needed to make a good article.
Grammar - As everyone mentioned, you have a poor grammar (Work more to improve it)
English level - Well, your English is not that bad but I think it's still not enough to qualify on the Infinity Star Team
Use of Caps - As I can see, you always use capital letters on most words from your sentences. That is so wrong

There are more but I think this reasons are enough to deny your application.