[Infinity Star Team Application] EyesOfMoOs

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Name: Klark Kneill E, Caudilla
Age: 17

Hello Guys as I Said in my Wiki Team Application "I am taking English reading\writing III, sometimes I really try my best doing essay and shorts answers and my English is not that good but, is understandable". I Klark Kneill E, Caudilla will try my best to this job for our community.

The reason why I am joining for this team is just because I want to step up more and do my best to help our community and help each other. As I said I will try my best to step up to our community and learn a lot more.


I am Always Online but, it depends in School time... I can Online 4 hours every after school days. And I can Use my Phone to be online in time. Gmt - 5:00 Central Time Zone.

Position applying: (Writer)


Forum


A place, meeting, or medium where ideas and views on a particular issue can be exchanged... A forum consists of 4 components: the forum itself, its categories, the topics and the messages. Forum is important to our community because of some players have a problem and they can contact our lovely Administrator and Moderator. We are lucky that we have a forum in our community. Do you know why? It's shows that not all MU online games have forum because they don't have enough players to register. These forums can be considered as containers for threads started by the community. Depending on the permissions of community members as defined by the forum administrator, they can post replies to existing threads and start new threads as they wish. In addition, users of a forum can post anonymously (if this is enabled by the Forum Administrator) or as their registered username.

Forum link: http://forum.infinitymu.net/forum.php

Link of this article: http://wiki.infinitymu.net/index.php?title=Forum


Thank you.
 

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Please don't take these criticisms as negative, use it as your new weapon. It'll be better if you made a new article for your application. In fact, 3 articles will be great. "Forum". Actually it's a article that doesn't trigger the reader's interest. When you hear the word "forum" it's meaning is somehow familiar. About its content, i can see that you're really working hard for this. But if this is an essay in school, i'd probably grade it 6/10. You're improving with your grammar and as you can said your english is indeed understandable but you'll be making an newspaper. An newspaper that is open from judgments among everyone. Not just our players but even guests who visits our forum. Neutral for me cashew. I know that i really really really sound arrogant right now but i'm doing this for you brother. I'm not hating on you or whatever ;) good luck!
 

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Its a yes for me. Moorse have a point though but the articles that are written on our newspaper are discussed by the team so I believe you wont make a boring one once your in the team. Your a wiki and I believe you could help us out.

Good luck on your app! :)
 

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1 article would do Moorse. Don't be to harsh with them. Btw, I read your application. There are still lapses though but this can be learned. Also you are part of the wiki team, which means, writing articles. You have potential. You got my support :) good luck!
 

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Application is approved. Welcome to Infinity Star Team!
 
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