Event POLL [Poll] InfinityMU Wiki Writer Event - Spring Edition 2020

[Poll] InfinityMU Wiki Writer Event - Spring Edition 2020


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Djinny

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Hello, Infinitians!

It's time for us to choose the winners for
InfinityMU Wiki Writer Event - Spring Edition!
>>>Event's Thread<<<


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Here are the entries:


hahakeeu
Santa Set​
Devias, a small city with a population of around 200 people, has stayed away and in hiding from the MU universe. Even though Devias is a very small town, it is considered as the most dangerous town in the MU universe. Crimes are being committed every day. People steal goods in order for them to live, sometimes people get desperate which results to killing. This has been the life of all the citizens on Devias. A lot of travelers have stated that Devias is the land of all Evil. Due to this, Devias remained hidden, avoided, and somehow deserted. Nicholas, a teenage boy, hated this lifestyle. As Nicholas and his family went to buy goods on the market, his parents were killed of unknown criminals who wanted to steal their goods and their money. After this incidents, Nicholas went to hiding. A year have passed, he live alone on a cave located on the deepest part of Devias. Nicholas was frustrated and wanted to solve this long time problem of his hometown. One day, as it was snowing really hard on Devias, Nicholas saw a lady holding her reindeer, struggling to get by due to the intense snowstorm. He offered to the lady that she can stay in his place for the time being until the storm pass. What Nicholas didnt know is that, the lady is a priestess with unique abilities and powers. The Priestess named Sevina, and Nicholas talked for hours. Sevina shared that before they met, she stayed in Devias for a week and haven't seen a single soul willing to put others first than their selves. Sevina said to Nicholas that Devias was full of Greedy , Unworthy, and Desperate people and will never be saved by this crisis but Nicholas disagreed. He said that his grandfather, Lawrence , the captain of the military, once said that Devias was once a quiet and peaceful city. A city where people are safe and secured. The crisis of Devias started when a group of Yetis once invaded the city. The City never regain its status back and was turned into a wasteland. Nicholas told Sevina that one day, He will change the city and bring back the smile of his people. With these words the priestess was moved. She offered a special mission to Nicholas. Find people who are willing to put other's S-afety first, who you think will be A-dmired by many, who are N-ice not only to people but all the living souls in the city, who are T-rustworthy to lead, and whose A-ngelic enough to see the good in all things. I will give you an extraordinary power, a Magical Suit that can create the most desirable things a human will ever think of. Give these kind of people what they desire Nicholas, She added. From now on, You will be named S.A.N.T.A . As the storm passed the priestess said goodbye but before the priestess left, he left her magical and most loyal reindeer named Rudolph, and said to Nicholas, you will be the Symbol of Hope. After this encounter, Nicholas went around the City of Devias finding all the good people through out a year and give them their materialistic desires once a year on the same day the priestess showed up, which was considered the coldest time in Devias. Due to the mission given by the priestess to Nicholas, Devias went back to its old status where people are doing good, treating each other well and a city where people are always smiling. As time goes by, the suit was handed to numerous of trusted people giving hope to others. It is said, who ever uses the magical suit will be strong enough to become the people's hope and sturdy enough to withstand all evil doers. Up until now, people of Devias are seeing a person riding his/her sleigh, guided by a reindeer and giving out gifts to good people on the coldest day of Devias.


xrico17
Horus Imperial Set
Horus was the leader of the Archangels created by the Gods to guard and protect the continent and inhabitants of iMU. He is also the most powerful among the archangels and because of the power and greatness that he possess, the people worshiped him and called him the Archangel of Protection. Horus is an arrogant Archangel and he often boast about his greatness. Over time he became corrupted by his powers.

Centuries have passed, Horus became more and more corrupted. He wanted to live like a God and make an empire of his own in the heavens. He poisoned the minds of the other archangels and persuade them to join him. Many Archangels stayed true to their purpose and fled away from Horus, while others joined him and enslaved the people of iMU. Horus ordered his worshipers to build him a tower in the north, near the mountains of Devias. The tower soared high up in the mountains piercing the clouds and it served as a shrine where the people worshiped him and the corrupted archangels. It also served as a gate to Horus’s kingdom, and later on Horus named his empire Icarus. He abandoned his duty and became a cruel Emperor. He conquered many lands and kingdoms of men and elves. None could stand against him and his army.

This however, did not sit well with the Gods that created him. They have watched and have seen enough of Horus’s treachery. He has corrupted his purpose and abandoned his duty as guardian. Above all this, they would not let one of their creations be treated equal to a God. Knowing that the kingdom of Men and Elves could do nothing against him, the Gods made their move and unleashed their wrath against Horus’s Empire. His army proved no challenge to the Gods and the Imperial Palace of Horus quickly fell down from the skies like it was nothing. The Gods cursed the archangels that followed him and turned them into a mindless monsters, such as Alquamos, while others became a lesser kind of dragon known as Drakan. Realizing that he was nothing compared to his creators, he begged the Gods for forgiveness, but the Gods are unwilling to accept his repentance and as punishment for his crimes, they took Horus’s spirit and sealed it to his Imperial Armour and staff. He became a prisoner for all eternity unable to live the way he wanted nor influence anyone for he is now trapped inside the Imperial set that he used to enslave the people of iMU.

The Gods gave the Imperial Set to the mortals, so that they could protect themselves in times of need. This way Horus's true purpose would still be fulfilled but in the body and hands of a mortal. They would have the power of the very archangel that enslaved them for many years.

Throughout the centuries, Horus was forgotten by the mortals and only the elves of Noria knows the true story. The tower that served as an entrance to his old empire remained and later on the people called it Lost Tower and the ruins of Icarus became an outpost for the flying creatures that tormented the lands of iMU.


LE: TheFearOne's entry is disqualified due to plagiarism.


The winners will be announced on 29th of May.
Congrats to all for participating and sharing their lovely entries with iMU community and gudluck!


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BORIS

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all entries was awesome! but i was moved on xrico's piece! worth reading!
 

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My vote goes to hahakeeu. Truely the best wiki for me. It defines the topic and worth reading.
 

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I vote for hahakeeu, I love the topic and worth reading Santa.
 

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It was hard for me to choose between TheFearOne and xrico17.

hahakeeu's entry for me seems to be revolving around more on Devias rather than the set.
props tho to the SANTA mnemonic.

TheFearOne was a good entry. His entry reminds me of Loki the trickster.
He managed to connect Greek mythology to the iMU continent.
Although i had to read it several times to understand the story.

xrico17 made a lore from the Egyptian God Horus, The God of Sky.
Almost similar to Fear, he managed to connect Egyptian mythology into the game.
His entry does not use fancy words but it was easy to read and understand.
Simple but well constructed.

If i had to vote two, I would. Sad I can only choose one.
Judging the entries by its English, grammar, spelling, and sentence construction,
xrico17 gets my vote.

Goodluck everyone!
 

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I vote hahakeeu for this one. I love the flow of the story and its originality. The mnemonic part really got me.
 

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Looks like TheFearOne has been removed and so I have to vote for another one. I choose xrico17 since his story caught my attention more, has a better grammar and is more simpler but with great detail and story when compared hahakeeu. Although both made a great job which is out of the question. Anyway, Congrats to both in advance! xD
 
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I vote for hahakeeu , because I love the way he wrote and its worth reading.
 

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My vote goes to xrico17. I think he did a way better job and came out with a more solid and convincing storyline. Unique attack on hahakeeu's writing but I don't think its got enough to rival xrico17's work, goodluck to both participants.
 

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Damn xrico17's story really made me wanna read it till the end. Good english skills,very good thought out story,with a time line and connectivity between the characters in it.

The only thing which bothered me was the rushed out ending. One remark - you could have made Horus somehow fight equal with his opponents to keep up the thrill of the story and the ending must have been a heroic and unexpected end of Horus and turning him into weapons.

Overall great story.
 
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Both lore have good storyline and I enjoy reading them,
My vote goes for xrico17 because the story of fallen angel have more twisted general storyline, imagine a good person that first actually have a good purpose but in the end he fall to the dark side cause by his own greed of power, after all God still give him a chance to served for a good purpose even its mean he will sealed forever in his own weapon.

Good job both of you~!!! :thumbsup:
 

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both where great but the 1 from xrico17 was better. so he got my vote
 

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Hello and both are great indeed but xrico17 story was a little better and more originality...was enjoyable to read!
 
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I vote for hahakeeu's entry. I like the concept of giving and helping without expecting. He didnt mention the word "Christmas" but he put the spirit on it on his story.
 
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